Wednesday, May 23, 2012

HOMEWORK 5-23-12

Found Poems
One type of poem we have been writing in class is called a found poem.  Children often have difficulty selecting words when writing poetry.  This type of poem helps students with that dilemma while allowing them to critically analyze a text and compose a piece of writing.  In class, we have used familiar text to compose found poems about the main character in a story.  To write a found poem, students select phrases from a text to convey their thoughts.

Tonight, you are going to compose a found poem.  Go to the Speakaboos site (this link takes you directly to the fairy tales).  You only have 10 free stories before being charged a fee, so keep that in mind as you select the text for the assignment.  Select a fairy tale that we have not read in class (from this site, The Little Red Hen and Jack and the Beanstalk are off limits).  Listen and read along with the story.  Then, select a main character from the story.  Compose a found poem about that character by using lines from the story that describe the character. 

For instance, here's an example of one written about the Little Red Hen (use this link to the story so you can see how the words were selected):

Little Red Hen
the smallest
the most active resident of the farm
kept everything in the barn tidy and clean
help me plant this wheat
I will do it myself
who will help me cut the wheat?
I will do it myself
who will help me mill the wheat?
I will do it myself
who will help me bake the bread?
I will do it myself
she made the flour into a loaf of bread
who will help me eat this bread?
did you help me?
I will eat the bread myself

COMMENT BOX:  Select a fairy tale from Speakaboos.  Write a found poem about the main character from the story.  You may want to have scrap paper handy to record your words.  You will be able to pause the story and copy your words, also.  Remember, use the words you find in the story.  Share your poem by putting it in the COMMENT BOX.  There is not a specified length, but remember that you want to fully capture the spirit of the character.  Also, remember that your poem should have all words spelled correctly since you are getting them directly from the words on the page. 

13 comments:

Anonymous said...

Thumbelina

Beautiful golden hairs
skin as soft as flower petals
no bigger than a thumb
loved the old woman
didn't want to get married
didn't want go away from her home
everything looked so big around her
living on flower nectar and dewdrops
cold and exhausted
wanted to go home
missed the suns warm kiss
felt terribly lonely
fell in love
had the most beautiful wedding
cried dewdrop tears
lived happily ever after

Maleia Quidley

Anonymous said...

Chloe

The Frog Prince

Eyes as dark as the cool deep stream
An evil fairy enchanted me
I do not want your pearl and jewels
I do not want your fine clothes
If you will love me and let me live with you, eat from your golden plate and sleep upon your golden bed..
I will marry you and love you as long as we both shall live

Anonymous said...

Donovan Rickert

Thumblina
Golden hair
Skin as soft as flower petals
No bigger than my thumb
Thumblina and the king saw each other and they both immediately fell in love
The most beautiful wedding in all the land
Queen Thumblina
Lots of tiny flower babies
Happily ever after.

Anonymous said...

Married several times
Wives disappeared

Widow lived nearby
Neither daughter wanted to marry Bluebeard
Worried they would disappear
Avoided saying, "yes" to marriage

Bluebeard's house was fun
Younger daughter married Bluebeard

Away on business
Young wife has guests
She could only think about the little key

The key unlocked a forbidden door
Wives were statues
Blood stain on the key

Home from his trip
Missing the little key

Puts curse on his wife
Her brothers saved her
Bluebeard rode off into the woods

Gideon

Anonymous said...

Blake

Humongous Bear
lived in a cottage in the forest
had a humongous chair
had a huge bed
went for a walk
porridge too hot
chair to hard
bead too high at the head

Anonymous said...

Cinderella
filled with good nice
beauty and charm
excellent taste
as she helped them
sadly
dirty
burst into tears
in these rags
white and silver
sparkly jewelry
beautiful girl from the ball

Lily

Anonymous said...

Sophie

Cinderella
filled with goodness
did the dishes, scrubbed the floor
and made the beds
offered to help
had excellent taste
had nothing to wear
burst into tears
got the finest pumpkin she could find
a dress of white and silver
sparkling with jewels
appeared
glass slippers
beauty
forgot the time
leaving a glass slipper
a mystery and the prince would give anything to know who she was
tried the slipper on
perfectly fit
beautiful girl from the ball
married happily ever after


the end

Anonymous said...

GRACE SHOEMAKER

The youngest of the sisters.
More beautiful, thoughtful and caring.
Nothing made her happier than hearing about life above the sea.
On her 15th birthday she lifted her head above the waves and saw clouds of crimson and gold.
She could not take her eyes off the 16 year old prince.
Heavy clouds darkened the sky, lightning appeared, still she remained.
She searched the sea for the prince, grabbed hold of him and swam him to shore.
She grew fond of humans over time.
She wanted to become human and the seawitch took her voice in payment.
Turn to leave like a twinkling star, knowing she would never see her family again.
White legs, tiny feet, deep blue eyes.
The most beautiful creature in the palace and could neither speak nor sing.
He fell in love with another and the mermaid was heartbroken.
Hundreds of beautiful transparent beings sent her home.
She got her tail back and her life in the sea.

Anonymous said...

Eathen long poem

Dont be afraid dear princess
And put me into your golden bed

Dont be afraid dear princess
Go and let the frog in
Down, down into the cool dark water

Dont be afraid dear princess
Splash! Right into the water
you, your ball again

Anonymous said...

Thumbelina
I will call you Thumbelina
no bigger than my thumb
Toad carried her away
poor girl got away
found a cottage
I wanna go home
swallow flew down to rescue her
Happliy ever after

Courtney

Anonymous said...

Malia Speedy

The Princess And The Pea

The Prince
1.clothed in the finest suits
2.smartest teachers in all the land
3.time for him to be married
4.must be married to a real princess
5.set off with his servantsin search of a real princess
6.traveled for several days
7.he reached another kingdom
8.came to a castle


we tried to replay the story after we got home from our app in Nags Head to finish where we left off but it wouldn't let it play. here is what we did to that point.

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Anonymous said...

johnny

Beauty and the Beast
The Beast

Who said you could take my roses?
terrible voice
Was it not enough that I fed you?
This is how you show your gratitude?
By stealing my flowers?
Excuses and flattery
Death you deserve
I will forgive you on one condition.
Give me one of your daughters.
Mustn't force her to come.
Gave merchant a trunk of gold and jewels.
Rose for beauty.
Will come after you myself.
Do you love me beauty?
Goodnite.
Beauty do you love me?
Sad to see you go but I want you to be happy.
Ring on finger to return to castle.
Can you really love such an ugly creature?
Witch came to the castle.
Curse on the palace.
Terrible looking beast.
Light turned into handsome prince.
Long live the prince and his bride.

Anonymous said...

Three bears lived in a cottage in the woods
Each had his own pot of porridge
Each had his own comfy chair
Each bear had a bed that was just perfect
The bears walked out in the forest
Goldilocks crept up to the house
Goldilocks sat down and began to eat
Goldilocks noticed three comfy chairs
Seeing three warm beds
went to sleep
somebody's been eating my porridge
somebody's been sitting in my chair
somebody's been lying in my bed
and here she is
woke up Goldilocks
she sprang up and jumped out
learned her lesson and became a good little girl

Kaleb